Follow Your Heart edition by Candia Murphy Health Fitness Dieting eBooks
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Lisa Stevens runs to a quiet mountain retreat after being made a laughing stock in the gossip columns at home. As she drives back to her home and life, her car breaks down during an ice storm, forcing her to seek refuge with a local, the handsome rock star Michael Joyce.
Follow Your Heart edition by Candia Murphy Health Fitness Dieting eBooks
I bought this book some time ago and today I finally read it. Unfortunately I only got as far as the third chapter. Although the premise was good, the amount of "telling" rather than "showing" in the manuscript put me off. The jump from Lisa arriving at Michael's house and them getting down and dirty was far too fast for my liking (even for an erotic) - would a virgin seriously be so bold and would "it" happen so fast? I doubt it somehow.Characterisation and details are lacking, although the build up to Lisa's arrival at the mansion was not too bad. However, after that, it was rushed and lots of essentials skipped.
The manuscript needs a re-write and in the process, a darned good edit.
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Follow Your Heart edition by Candia Murphy Health Fitness Dieting eBooks Reviews
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this is a good book to read so far.
It is hard to stop reading it just keeps getting better and better.
This is a great book. I love the way allows people to self-publish books because it gets books like this out there. I tend to stick to a few authors that I know and love when I am buying books, but decided to check this one out since it was free. I was hooked at once and am looking forward to reading more from this author.
Awesome book
I bought this book some time ago and today I finally read it. Unfortunately I only got as far as the third chapter. Although the premise was good, the amount of "telling" rather than "showing" in the manuscript put me off. The jump from Lisa arriving at Michael's house and them getting down and dirty was far too fast for my liking (even for an erotic) - would a virgin seriously be so bold and would "it" happen so fast? I doubt it somehow.
Characterisation and details are lacking, although the build up to Lisa's arrival at the mansion was not too bad. However, after that, it was rushed and lots of essentials skipped.
The manuscript needs a re-write and in the process, a darned good edit.
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